Talk:Heroic Domination Mastered Super Saiyan Gohan(Pre-Teen)/@comment-40133750-20190905174344

ART

Render : SSJ1? Great! SSJ2? Also great? However, it's not custom and no effort so the max I can give is 7.

Effects : I like the split in the SSJ1, although the aura looks like garbage. The fire behind him looks cool though. The aura is one of the main parts on any SSJ card so messing that up reduces your score quite a bit. 6/10 for the SSJ.

Now, onto SSJ2, The blue flaring effect Kamehameha is awesome. It's a werble effect but could be reciprocated in dokkan so it deserves a pass. No dokkan effects makes it seem a bit lazy and the, it's really overcrowded. The rocks reappearing in the same place also makes no sense. The render literally can't be seen unless I squint in the SSJ2 form. 4/10

Overall for effects, 5/10.

Now, onto the  background.

The SSJ1 Background just doesn't fit. What you should've done is used(or made, original is always better!) an actual scenery background and then used the background you have and reduced opacity to make it look cool. SSJ2 Background is awesome and represents that he's fighting to protect the earth. 7/10.

19/30(much better than last time, good effort!) = 31.67/50

INFOS

LS : 2 new categories, nice. Only issue is that it has to be 170/130 or 177% or 150 to all. 9/10

Passive: SSJ1 : Ouch. It's OP, but dokkan syntax was absolutely butchered. 200% boost for an LR, will pr9bably be here in about 2 years lol. Please, don't make them this OP, they will be hitting abou 5 or 6 mil before transforming. Just don't. 5/10

SSJ2 : Wayyyy too OP. 3/10.

Total PS : 4/10

Active Skill: Okx now this is legit. I like it. 10/10.

Dokkanesque : Not even close. The name is just wrong, and the fact that you included Goku makes it non DBZ esque as well. Well, Atleast the thumb and other stuff are there. Shame. 2/10

Links and Categories : Nuhuh to joined forces. 9/10

Total for infos : 39/60 = 32.5/50

(32.5 + 31.67)/100 = 64.17%.

You failed by a bit. And it's certainly nowhere near 10/10. Not even close.

Honeslty, the fact that you think you're so perfect makes you look like a petty, bratty narcissist. Not to mention the delusion.

At this point, I'm just thinking that you are trying to piss people off in order to gain attention.

If you don't mind me asking, how old are you?

And yeah, Mr. NaziBuu, pissing off IS in the dragon ball dictionary so don't you dare delete this comment.